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who is that girl
she seemed so unbreakable
she seemed so stong
always laughing
you thought she would never stop
thought she would never quit
untill she meet you
that unbreakable girl soon broke
that strong girl son crumbled
that laughing girl soon cried everyday
she just stopped one day
she finally quit
i wrote this 2/15/05 i was talking to jack...it was a kind of good chat but kind of not...i don't know...lol... it just involved alot of crazy stuff...um yeah i don't know if this poem would be for him but yeah anyways i guess i kind of like it...lol...

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Meadow1209 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
i like this. Its really good :) :+fav: again lol
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deadinside28713 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2005
aww thanks again glad u like it :glomp:
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Meadow1209 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
;-) correction... i like it ALOT. I still do. I like(d) it so much that i faved it. lol. your welcome :):):):):glomp:
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Hush- Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2005
It intrigues the reader to know...what did she quit? Nice work!
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deadinside28713 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2005
thanks she quit life is what i was going for
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itaichan Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2005
awesome job! its a nice train of thought to write about...nicely written as well! fuck yea! :D
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deadinside28713 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2005
thanks a bunches
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itaichan Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2005
:D *nods* yuppers!
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dark-queen Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful poem... I agree with all the comments here
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deadinside28713 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2005
aww thanks so much :hug:
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rae-of-light Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2005   Traditional Artist
Beautiful :D
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deadinside28713 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2005
thanks so much :hug:
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rae-of-light Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2005   Traditional Artist
You are very welcome :smooch: You are very talented!!
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deadinside28713 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2005
aww thanks again :hug:
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artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2005
wooow! i love that sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo FUCKING MUCH!!!!!! DEFFENTAL Y A FAV!
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deadinside28713 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2005
aww thanks so much :hug:
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artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2005
Np gurl! i love that poem! diffentaly one of my favs from u! but who am i to say there all so damn good! *trys to steal ur talent* crap didnt work! lol ^^; lol
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deadinside28713 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2005
aww thanks so much :hug: god ur awesome.... i :heart: you :glomp:
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artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2005
:giggle: wow u dont belive anyone has ever said that to me before! lol i loves you to hun :hug: and hey np! :glomp:
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GreavR Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2005
awww I was going to say you had alot of talent as an artist, oh well...
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